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A Star Wars Saga Version

Posted on February 1st, 2020, by Michael Rountree

What follows are my ideas for an overall story concept that could have been made for episodes 7, 8, and 9. The overall war arc would be the rising of the First Order as a threat. The point is that the heroic Rebellion now has to recognize the resurgence of an evil they fought before, and not be complacent enough to allow history to repeat.


The Real Story of the F-106 “509 Accident”

Posted on January 9th, 2019, by Michael Rountree

What follows is the story written – and lived – by my father, describing a harrowing incident that nearly took his life and the lives of his fellow fighter pilots. The crash of 509 has apparently been widely reported; lesser well-known is the account of 509’s wingman, my dad. Enjoy: The Real Story of the […]

How an Interdictor Could Have Fixed The Last Jedi

Posted on January 18th, 2018, by Michael Rountree

The whole “Rebels On The Run” theme kind of falls apart on reflection. The chase, as presented, feels absurd. What is needed is a plot device that prevents a fleet of starships from escaping, something that makes sense within the Star Wars universe…


My Fix For The Last Jedi

Posted on January 4th, 2018, by Michael Rountree

Visually, “Star Wars: The Last Jedi” is a sumptuous feast. There are scenes that will make any long-time Star Wars fan salivate. However, there are a number of flaws with the movie, so many missed opportunities (one thing about the Jedi is that they do not miss opportunities), tonal incongruities, and plot weaknesses. I won’t […]

ARRIVAL: CHFR #2 at Winchester

Posted on September 16th, 2012, by Michael Rountree

One of the boys, lacking all manner of tact, asked why things looked so junky around here, but good Mr. Pemrunning just laughed and shrugged. “Boys,” he said, “You’ve reach the very end of the world out here! This is right where God is still in the business of creation, and if I took you any further up the line, well then, you’d fall plum off the edge of the planet!”

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